It's time for the 50-word challenge weekly summary and launch of a new prompt. I'll provide links to the full collection of 50-word stories from last week and highlight a few excellent gems. But first... an announcement.
Announcement!
I am on vacation for a week in a tiny remote town in California that has no internet. (Actually, it does, in one spot, outside a little community center that supports the town's youth. Which is great because I intended to post this before traveling, and with one thing and another, I wasn't able to, so here I am sitting on a rough wooden bench amidst golden hills dotted with cows. I digress.)
The writing must go on! So. I will provide a prompt in this post, but I may be very delayed in responding to story submissions and posting the new prompt next week. Thank you in advance for your patience!
(Image credit: Original image by pixel2013, Pixabay)
Last week's 50-word stories
I’d like to welcome our newest contributors, @felixgarciap, @henry-gant, and @gmatthe2. Thanks for joining the Fifty Worders!
Last week's prompt was “break.”
Here is the complete list of stories inspired by the “break” prompt:
- Futile Efforts, by @roxy-cat
- What could possibly go wrong? by @preparedwombat
- Bonded, by @calluna
- The utter joy of surfing, by @creatr
- The Break, by @thinknzombie
- Lost to the Sea, by @aksounder
- Broken Innocence, by @therosepatch
- Rise Again, by @alheath
- The Lesson, by @anikekirsten
- Despair, by @ablaze
- A hectic week, by @felixgarciap
- Break Time, by @pyemoney
- The Unholy Ride, by @papacrusher
- Patched Smaller, by @ahmadmanga
- The Hunter, by @jadams2k18
- Yours, by @eroticabian
- Break, by @purpledaisy57
- Breakin' down, by @theironfelix
- BREAK, by @tinkerrose
- Break, by @henry-gant
- Firebreak, by @bex-dk
- A Steemit break, by @cizzo
- Union Rules, by @vdux
- Just Another Apple Joke, by @blueteddy
- Break, by @dirge
- Jealousy, by @anonymummy
- Liar, by anonymummy
- Broken, by anonymummy
- Unconscious, by @anonymummy
- Break or Bend, by @botefarm
- Sunrise, by @olakunle10
- Broken, by @jasminearch
- The Break: Every Cloud Has a Silver Lining, by @stbrians
- In stark contrast, by @jayna If I missed yours, please let me know and I will add it! I always try my best to list them all, but I do occasionally miss one.
- Write a story in 50 words. (It's especially cool if you can hit 50 words exactly!)
- Use the #fiftywords tag, and **post the link in the comments of this post**.
- Be sure to read and upvote the work of the other participants. It's all about community!
- Use only artwork that you have the right to use, and attribute it properly. See the following guidelines.
- The image is public domain, or under creative commons licensing rules.
- It is your own image.
- If it is not one of the above, you must have actual permission.
Highlights of the week
Each week I highlight a few of the stories from the previous week, to shine a light on the lovely little world of 50-word stories.How do I choose the highlights, you might ask? Well, the true confession is that it is overall a rather subjective process, but it is based on my many many years as a writer and editor, and my love of the wonder and magic of great storytelling.
When I read a micro-fiction story, I want to see that the author took time to make every word count. I want to be emotionally moved, amused or surprised by the storytelling, to feel that there is a world beyond this microcosm I am witnessing, or a little cayenne dash of inspiration or insight about a moment in time or an event in history. And I want to see proper grammar and punctuation, because that tells me the writer really cared and took the time to edit the piece.
Does it have to be perfect? No. I am not perfect, and I am not looking for perfection. And I know that people bring vastly different writing abilities, language skills and even knowledge of English to the table. So perfection is not what I am looking for.
Also, I try to highlight multiple writers. It would be easy for me to always pick the experienced writers who have the special powers to pull all those special things together -- the voice, the storytelling, the editing, and the emotional impact. But I want to highlight emerging writers too, who also put real heart into their writing and share it with a mixture of trepidation and pride.
In short, the "highlights" are just that. It's always so hard because there are many lovely and deserving stories that emerge from the weekly prompt. The stories I choose are just a sampling. They may not even be the best, in a technical sense, but they are captivating and full of soul.
With that said, here are just a few delicious picks from last week.
Alone on the Sea, by @gmatthe2
In this lyrical story, we get a glimpse into what it might be like to be a cast-away.
Adrift, lips dry, the weather breaks and rain falls down.
A day passes. A night. Light dim and directionless moves through the fog that curls off the water. A necromancer's potion.
In the distance a bell sounds. Again closer. Your heart beats. You draw your breath.
Lost to the Sea, by @aksounder
I couldn't help choosing the two stories from last week about drama on the sea, as they are both amazing and so different in perspective.
Storm-strained sails threatened to break the mast. Olandir remained resolute. A surge knocked him to the deck.
Clouds rolled overhead, mirroring the darkness of the tossing sea where Rán eagerly spread her net below. Olandir reached out for the helm.
This attempt to round the cape would be his last.
Broken Innocence, by @therosepatch
This story's author explores the effects of damage to the human spirit from a unique viewpoint.
Paul swung the rock down on the chain with as much force as his restraints allowed. Twenty years in this hell-hole. He was innocent, dammit!
He swung again. Why didn’t they believe him?
One more strike. The chain broke at last.
He’d show them just how guilty he could be.
The Break, by @thinknzombie
This author does many things in this little micro fiction piece, including exploring the difficulties occurring between two people in a relationship. But it's not just any two people. They are actively involved in a heist. But she has a separate agenda. Be sure to read the wonderful description @thinknzombie provided of his editing process.
Cassandra spun the dial.
“You done yet?” Joel never believed in her. “Security. Two minutes tops.”
A few more turns...
He sighed. “Time. I’m leaving.”
His footsteps faded just as the safe opened.
Pocketing the gems, she checked her watch. Thirty seconds.
Time enough to escape from security. And Joel.
What Could Possibly Go Wrong? by @preparedwombat
In this story, the author takes a humorous look at the story behind a famous mythological tale. I won't give it away.
“Your greatgreatgrandpa Dora’s chest must have been in the attic a hundred years. Find anything interesting in it?”
“Mostly junk, except for this cool looking box.”
“Whoa. A wax seal. Stamped ‘Pan’. What’s a Pan?”
“His second wife’s name. Met her in Athens.”
“Break the seal. Let’s see what’s inside.”
Wonderful work, my friends!
This week's 50-word story prompt
The prompt for this week is “shade.” On your mark, get set, go Fifty Worders. I look forward to seeing what you do with this prompt.
Guidelines
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Deadline for this week: Saturday, July 21st.
The 50-word story clan
I'm mentioning you here if have participated in the #fiftywords short story challenge in the past. Please let me know if you would like your tag removed in this or future posts. (Note that I do trim the list. Those who have not participated for a long time or are not active on Steemit will eventually drop from the mentions.)
@ablaze, @adigitalife, @aggroed, @agmoore, @ahmadmanga, @akdx, @aksounder, @alexandered, @alheath, @anikekirsten, @anixio, @anonymummy
@bagpuss, @beginningtoend, @bex-dk, @blueteddy, @botefarm @brandonsadventur, @bryarose23
@caleblailmusik, @carn, @cheekah, @cizzo, @clacrax, @creatr
@damianjayclay, @deirdyweirdy, @desmoniac, @diebitch, @dirge, @divineinyang, @donnest
@eaglespirit, @elementm, @emwalker, @enjar, @eroticabian, @esttyb, @evgsk
@feebie, @felixgarciap, @felt.buzz, @ficciones, @foxfiction, @foxyspirit
@galactichunter, @gaming-stuff, @girlbeforemirror, @gmatthe2
@jadams2k18, @janine-ariane, @jakeybrown, @jasminearch, @jayna, @jluvs2fly, @jonknight, @josecarrasquero, @joyyrush
@kaelci, @kally, @khadija14, @kimberlylane, @ktfabler
@ldacey-laforge, @lightoj, @liverussian, @lucylin, @luiskrupaz
@Mammasitta, @marie-jay, @mark-dahl, @mgaft1, @mineopoly, @miniature-tiger, @mizdais, @momzillanc, @mydivathings
@navaneeth, @negativer, @niallon11
@paintingangels, @papacrusher, @phillyc, @pixiehunter, @poeticnest, @preparedwombat, @prydefoltz, @puppetmaster1111, @purpledaisy57, @pyrowngs
@ravencorinn, @riottales, @rodrigocabrera, @roxy-cat
@sharoonyasir, @spalatino, @sue-stevenson, @sukhasanasister
@tanglebranch, @thatlovechild, @theblackcrow, @theironfelix, @therosepatch, @thinknzombie, @tiatu, @tinkerrose, @tuwore, @tygertyger
@vaitelavicius, @vdux, @vivek-g
@wa2qr, @wales, @whitelite, @wylde
About the 50-word challenge
This weekly 50-word challenge starts off each Sunday with a one-word prompt. Participants use the prompt to create a micro-fiction story in just 50 words. For more info and inspiration: check out the recent post about this project, Fifty-word challenge: FAQs, ideas, motivation and showcase.
Thanks so much for reading! If you haven’t yet written a story in 50 words, try it. It's a really amazing challenge to see what can unfold in a mere 50 words!
Posted from my blog with SteemPress : https://jaynalocke.com/2018/07/16/new-50-word-story-prompt-plus-an-announcement/
Enjoy your time away! Us 50 Word slaves will be toiling in the depths as we count the minutes until your return.
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That warms my heart! Thank you, @negativer. Whenever I come to our family cabin on the Lost Coast, I am reminded of my technology addiction. And with only occasional access, I am reminded that the world does not come to an end without it.
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I admit those same thoughts were in my head as I imposed my own partial ban on tech last week when I was in Denver. I had decent internet access, but chose not to utilize it for anything other than work-related fires (and checking the weather). The week off from the assumption that you have to be connected 24/7 is refreshing and does rearrange one's priorities a bit.
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You are on point.
I occasionally declare some days 'tech Sabbath' to be able to focus on other important things in life, spending time with family and enjoying the gentle embrace of nature.
I always come out such periods fully energised and refreshed with new enthusiasm to face all of life's hurdles.
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It’s a good reminder!
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My entry: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@steemgiant/small-things
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Tada: https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@therosepatch/moonshade-a50wordshortfromtheshardofmyrsi-dnub3bpe7a
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Thank you very much for feeding this weekly challenge. It is very good also to know the work of other steemians. And I also wish you happy holidays @jayna. Best regards
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Hello again!
Here is my entry. Hope you'll enjoy it!
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Thanks for the highlight, @jayna, and enjoy your vacation!
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Thanks so much, @therosepatch!
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Happy holidays @jayna when you come back here is my submission 'Forest Adventure'
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@gmatthe2/forest-adventure-fifty-word-challenge-e680ed0c5b579
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Happy holidays @jayna. This is my entry. https://steemit.com/esteem/@felixgarciap/my-eternal-companion-49e56bcd56a6dest
Best regards
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Her mouth quivered, tears pooled at its corners -- I thought, “why couldn’t she have been a better person?” Then I turned, and said goodbye to my mother for the last time. Passing through a threshold, her thick lips, unwanted hair, and dark black shaded skin was all I left behind.
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Thanks for participating in the 50-word challenge. Is this your first entry? You'll want to post your challenge entries on your own blog and provide the link here. (Just for future reference.) Welcome to the challenge!
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I did write last week's challenge. The link is here
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@stbrians/the-break-every-cloud-has-a-silver-lining
Here is my newest
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@stbrians/jayna-s-fiftywords-contest-the-falling-of-giants
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Hi @stbrians. Welcome to the 50-word challenge! I apologize if I missed your entry for last week. Did you add the link to the challenge post? Thanks for joining!
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Here be me submission for this contest.
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Hope you have a super-fun, chilled, relaxing, recuperating holiday @jayna...
Here is my little micro story for this week :o) https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@ablaze/in-the-shade-of-the-sun-a-fifty-word-story
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Thanks, @ablaze!
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My Entry
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Hope you're enjoying some time off @jayna. Here's my take on your shade prompt. https://steemit.com/fiction/@thinknzombie/thepriestandthepirate50wordstory-gbk69gxc9q
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Enjoy your time off! I love these stories. There are so many amazing stories with so few words, I am in awe!
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Me too. Isn’t it fun? 😊
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Adding mine to the jenga tower of short stories right....here.
Needs Work
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Jenga tower is right! A lot has stacked up while I've been traveling. Oh the fun I will have catching up!
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Really enjoying these Jayna! Here's mine for this week's prompt:
Disgraced Healer
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Great story, @aksounder!
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Here is my entry. Now to read through the others!
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a poem from eve via me for you @jayna by evie
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With practice and practice I offer my entry for sacrifice.
Hope you have a wonderful and relaxing time, Jayna!
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Thank you! It really was! I haven't quite caught up with everything yet, but I'm getting there.
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Hope you are enjoying the much-needed break. I managed to finish my story a bit faster this week by starting more quickly--it still got rest between edits.
https://steemit.com/fiction/@bex-dk/inhisshadeafiftywordstory-fwztx5auzn
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I hope you have fun on your trip :D Here's my submission:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@blueteddy/shade
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Thank you for the mention. I have to say it has been a long time since I have written for fun. This story flowed nicely with the hardest part being the manual counting as I wrote to stay within the word limit. Found my way here just in time through @thinknzombie who's post definitely reflects a truer picture of how a story is produced.
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Congrats on getting back to writing for fun! You clearly have a voice worth exploring.
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This is my 50-word story ;)
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@pizzachain/into-the-shade-or-50-word-story-contest-entry
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my entry https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@tinkerrose/new-50-word-story-shades. Have a nice day.
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Here’s mine:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@preparedwombat/the-best-laid-schemes-o-mice-an-men-gang-aft-agley
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Oh my. How delightful! Your intellectual silliness gripped me again!
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have fun @jayna. Here is my first poem for the week
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Hi, everyone. Here is my entry for the challenge. Good luck to you all.
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@hlezama/liaison-a-5o-word-story-for-jayna
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Thanks for joining the 50-word challenge. Very nice story!
By the way, this is a “challenge,” vs. a “contest.” It’s an opportunity for participants to try to write a complete and compelling story in 50 words. There are no winners; I just highlight a few great stories each week. 😊
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My pleasure. Noted and edited :)
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Here is the link to my entry:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@pyemoney/candy-red
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Enjoy your vacation. You might even get ideas for new prompts. Here is my entry : https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@purpledaisy57/fiftywords-prompt-the-shadowy-ghost
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Kudos for going a great job here.
Here's my submission..
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@kingspiration/story-in-fifty-words-shade
And do enjoy a most memorable holiday
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I did it! Hopefully not too late:
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@vdux/a-story-in-fifty-words-shade
::heart::
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It's not too late until I post a new prompt! :-)
You're fine. And I'm running especially late this week due to my travels.
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Hi @jayna and Clan,
It has been a crazy week. But I managed to write a little description of one of my loves: the mountain. I hope you'll like it. 🙂
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@roxy-cat/fifty-words-challenge-or-or-mountain-f6b9a484b1e73
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Here is my entry for the week;
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@olakunle10/john
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Well, here's my entry, Unconditional. It's once again based on one of my works in progress, but a different one this time.
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Late I know....where does the time go?
https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@deirdyweirdy/sight-unseen-a-story-in-50-words
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I think time goes to the same place as socks that disappear in the laundry! :-)
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Thank you for counting me in. Thanks for the mention
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Here's my very late entry
https://steemit.com/fiffywords/@iamthegray/immorality-fifty-words-story
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Hi @iamthegray. You've supplied the link to your Pixabay image. Please swap in your actual post link! :-)
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Oh
My bad
I was in a hurry
Corrected
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Hi Fifty Worders. Here is my story for this week: https://steemit.com/fiction/@jayna/livingon-oqgfulb0ha.
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