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While the little boy shouts "Help! Help!, I can't swim!" Chena heard his Voice and immediately rush to the boy's aid. Chena begin to panic when she saw that pool being nine feet deep. Chena believed in herself then dived down and save the boy from drowning, the child survive...
I heard about the 50 word Story Contest Week#23 after scrolling down @literature-trail post https://steemit.com/fiftywords/@literature-trail/fifty-word-story-contest-week-23-bumper-edition-600-trail-90-voiceshares-and-15-sbd-to-be-won
That is how I knew about it.
nice post & beautiful photo
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What the hell, Your reputation is 48% already. You surpass me!
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Nice post, although I think you should work a bit on grammar. None the less, it's a well-written post :)
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Great post friend, You need to work on your grammer though. I do not know if you made a mistake again while typing on your cell phone but if so please fix it asap.
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Wow. Lovely story. But i guess you should watch your tenses next time you post.
You began by saying the little boy 'shouted'
Which is in the past, then the trend of verb should follow the past tense to avoid conflict of tenses. Nice story though. Wish you the best.
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I followed yours
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the grammar is certainly able to be improved, but the first past tense is completely correct.
It should have been like this I suppose
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oh, I just reread your comment and see that's what you were saying, sort of.
alls good
big hugs
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This is a lovely post. That's a spirit of love and care
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people have been making comments about your grammar, which I think is a little unfair if they don't help you correct it.
I hope you don't mind if I offer you a possible correction.
the grammar is certainly able to be improved, but the past tense is the usual or correct one.
It should have been like this I suppose
big hugs
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Its my phone doing that. Every time I text it misspelled what I enter or put a different word. I will correct it.
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