“Son, she looks my age. Who wears a lemon colored chiffon dress in this freezing weather?”
“Mother, Linda’s a professional dancer. She’s going to dance on Broadway,” Jason explained.
“You mean on a pole,” Jason’s mom mumbled.
“Mother did you say pole?”
“No honey, cold. I’m catching a nasty cold.”
I hope you enjoyed this 50-word short story that I shaped using the prompt for this week “lemon” created by @jayna in the #fiftywords writing challenge.
What a mom! D: sometimes the mothers in law are nightmares but others they are super special.
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So true. Trying to write more realistic fictional content. Thanks for reading.
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That is funny! The mom has to keep the majority of her opinion to herself or she will be a mother in law faster than she can blink. 😊
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Yes, even though this is a fictional story it mirrors what a lot of families go through.
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Ha ha. Got a good laugh out of that!!
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Thanks, @ablaze.
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A very fun read! That sounds like something I would say! I’m always shocking my children. 😊
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Thank you, @jayna. So glad that you could identify with the storyline. I certainly can in real life.
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I really like this. It reads so easily you'd never guess that the writer was constrained by a 50 word limit!
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