A cold smile [50-words short story contest]

in fiftywords •  6 years ago 

"Hello my sunshine, even today I hate you!"

Mary did not say a word.

Her love was a gift she had given him unconditionally.

He caressed her face.

That cold face carved on the grave stone was smiling tenderly at him

and for a moment his pain was less unbearable.

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Thanks to @jayna for her Weekly 50-word short story contest a new writing challenge, where less is more!

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Beautifully done, @road2horizon. I'm so glad you've joined the contest! This story is very impactful.

thank you, happy you appreciate it, we are running a little contest if you like you can join Guess again

Interesting, and painful... I'm struggling a little to grasp this.

😄😇😄

@creatr

thank for you comment, in 50 words it is difficult to close a story that is something for the immagination of the reader

Yes, I understand the difficulty because I've written many 50 word stories myself.

Thanks!

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