The season is changing - she stands on the porch and contemplates the tainted blue sky, darker and darker. The trees bow in a reverent green chaotic fury.
It rains...
The smell of wet dirt clears her mind as she picks some wood to start a fire. For a darker season.
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Steemit 50 Word Story Contest. Week 4. Word: SEASON
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Nice story, well done
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You have a really great intro.
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thank you!
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I like how you could take the scene both literally and metaphorically. Quite intriguing.
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Yep, that's what i intended, great! Thank you for your input, I don't have a lot of experience in English creative writing. I've written along some prosaic stuff, not regularly, but mostly in Portuguese...
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Well, it's really good - if you didn't say you don't have much experience in English creative writing I wouldn't have known :) Looking forward to more posts
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