Into the Forest (Fifty-words short story)

in fiftywords •  7 years ago  (edited)

“Look deep into nature, and then you will understand everything better”. — Albert Einstein


This is an entry for the #FiftyWords challenge by @jayna. The prompt for this week is Forest. Enjoy!

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Into the Forest

I did not know what was happening. Couldn’t stop. She was like gravity, and I just matter, falling into her law, running after her, following her among the trees of that lost forest like a galaxy being attracted by a black hole. I knew it then, she was the forest.


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Yimi Ipsa.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    The forest is one of my favorite places to be, really enjoyed this!

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      Is one of my favorite too! Thanks for reading!

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        ·  7 years ago 

      I love how you have portrayed the powerful draw of the forest. Nicely done!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        The forest is my favorite prompt on literature or movies, so it was a pleasure to write about it. Keep it up those #fiftywords challenges!

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Too bad we're cutting down those forests...

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            ·  7 years ago 

          One of the worst things (we) humans are doing.

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              ·  7 years ago 

            ¡Me encantó! De verdad, brutal.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              ¡Gracias @clacrax!

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