a fifty word story The Porch

in fiftywordstory •  6 years ago 

This is my submission to the Fifty word story contest. Hope you like it.

“I love this porch,” he said.
“I do, too. You’re early for the hunt,” I said looking up from my book.
“What hunt?” he asked.
“The one tonight at eight,” I said.
“I just came for the porch and the rocking chair,” he said.
I turned and he was gone.

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photo and house are mine.
#fiftywordshortstory.
Thank you @vdux and @jayna

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Sounds like a visit from the other side?

Ooh nice. It makes me wonder if he was a spirit, or perhaps her imagination. Or maybe the mysterious hunt frightened him away. So many questions!

I had similar thoughts.

Certainly you left a moment of mystery. Congratulations @lahvista