RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #67! - With the best intentions

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Finish The Story Contest - Week #67! - With the best intentions

in finishthestory •  5 years ago 

Doctor Morre, hahah. Appropriate. All the elements are effective and in their place. I like the flashback before the incident and the way you characterized the protagonist. The final twist is also a nice touch and, like everything here, coherent and realistic.

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