Day 182: Five minute freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: Red Wine

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Red Wine


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Polyphenols bring me your succor,
was just a babe at the first taste
of your ancient perfidy.
Napa Valley a childhood playground,
fatuous
and
unashamed
until the day Burgundy, France
brought your
earthy,
elegant, and
complex virtuosity.
Iconoclast 'til the very end,
the ingenuous child grew up
Awakened to your fine bouquet.
My dear Red Wine.


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"I was wrong
Now I find
Just one thing makes me forget
Red Red Wine" ~ UB40

Ahh that song gets old but the red wine never does. How ya been EagleSpirit?

bahhhhh!!
I"m okay, how are you ILW!!?? :)

Very beautiful! I love

was just a babe at the first taste
of your ancient perfidy.
Well done!

Aww thank you so very much! you are too kind and i love you for it! :)

How I wish I could drink much wine...lovely poetry

how about just a sip? hee hee

thank you so much! :)

that'll do, but I better devour the grapes...hehehe

oh wow, okay

Wine is a good inspiration for poetry, especially after a few glasses :)
Yours is like an ode, I like it both - red wine and your poetry.

it sure is!! water of the Gods!! darn i should have used that line ... bah! :)

Red wine is good but it makes me bit hung-over, makes me feel like an empty wine soaked oak barrel the next day... =)

haahahha oh snappssss ... pushes a glass of wine to FF

Thanks!!! =)

youre welcome!

Beautiful, we love red wine. Great poem. Congratulations 👏

thank you so much!! so glad you stopped by :)

I love wine. As the saying goes a glass of wine a day keeps the doctor away. Though I think it might be an apple a day lol.

yay wine!! yeah, i think its an apple. aahahahah

Hahah we crossed paths again my friend. I hope you still remember me lol.

hi there! how are you? yes we do, we have the same interests i guess? :)
hope you are well and happy!

Been in quite some ups and downs but still here lol. Catch you around. 😊

i'm so sorry, and my prayers are with you. see youz around town ... :p

This is a well planned freewrite up. Everything is on point. Well done. @eaglespirit.

well planned, i dunno ... it wasn't easy thats for sure. :) thank you so much!

Hello @eaglespirit. Nice to see you in freewrite.

thank you! i've been at it a little bit but here and there. :)

nice flow

thank you kind sir!

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oh shoot! thank you for looking out! :)