5 minute Freewrite Sunday - Sunset

in freewrite •  7 years ago 

The captain and his crew was trapped in Davy Jones locker. To escape the said doom. They should unlock the hidden clues in the certain map they have. Then, when all hope was lost, the captain suddenly shriek. What's that over there! Then he ran to the outer side of the deck, then he screams again and runs to the oposite side. The crew was curious as to what he was seeing, so they followed him, back and forth the scenario was repeated. Untill they started to rock the boat. The boat started to shift from left to right and right to left. Until it turned upsidedown, just in time for sunset... When the sun closed to the horizon. Their was a green flash. Sooo then, the ship showered out of the water. It was sunrise on the other side and they are free from Davy Jones locker.

Moral of the story. In every sunset, comes another surnrise.


Hi! If you read my work, thanks! This story is related from a movie a kept on watching repeatedly, and seeing the sunset as the topic, that scene burst out of my memory. Luckily, i finished the story as concisely as possible. If you know the movie, just reply me. Idk if doing this is allowed here. If it's now, let me know. Thank you for your time again!

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

You had me guessing along with the crew! Nice twist at the end. I am the proud bringer of today's landmark prompt.

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How fun!! You retold a movie memory! And tied it in to the prompt. Love it!