The Shipwreck (true story): 5 Minute Freewrite Prompt, 'Salty Air'

in freewrite •  7 years ago 

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All Photos are mine, taken by me and my "steemit" kids @abyni & @knightengale as well as my husband @serapium may be seen in some of them :)


Living on a sailboat, at least in our case, meant that the salty air was the norm. It's somewhat indescribable, the smell, the taste, the simple feel of always being surrounded by the salty ocean air. Everything was pretty much always damp, but somehow when we were in the Bahamas at least, it wasn't an unpleasant thing. (Don't get me started on Florida, though!)

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our boat home in the background

It was basically living outside, on the water. There was never a time when we were inside closed doors really, other than when it rained really hard... and that was somewhat miserable, because then it was like being stuck in a car in a hot parking lot with no breeze at all. That's what happens when your windows mainly sit on the roof of your ocean home!

When I think of salty air, the first memory that pops into my mind is the first time we saw the Sapona Shipwreck. It was our third day (maybe?) since we had sailed from the US (Florida) to the Bahamas and made the crossing to Bimini. We'd checked into the country, paid the fees and customs and we were free to explore. We anchored overnight near the sight of a shipwreck that we'd heard was an amazing place to go diving and snorkeling.

I wasn't expecting too much myself. I was still way too afraid of the water, way too intimidated by my lack of good swimming skills and the thought of snorkeling freaked me out (and yet, yes, I lived on a boat on the ocean).

However, the next morning, I woke up, stumbled out of my cabin and popped my head out of the pilot house to look towards where this wreck was supposed to be.

I was STUNNED. There, rising up out of the amazingly turquoise waters was an enormous shipwreck. It was the most beautiful thing I'd seen yet. I just stood there practically shouting, "HOLY SHIT! HOLY SHIT! OH MY GOD!" I was enraptured.

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I realize that I have odd... tendencies and the things that impress me or that I get entertainment out of are different than a lot of people, but the visual of this totally unexpected sight blew me away. It's been a year and a half-ish and I can still vivdly remember the immense amount of feelings that this sight evoked in me. It literally brought tears to my eyes.

My husband and our kids spent the day diving, snorkeling, climbing and jumping off of the shipwreck and it was just one of the best days ever. Still one of my favorite times on the boat.

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And here is the video from that part of our trip, if you're interested:


Thanks to @mariannewest for the #freewrite challenges!

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Wow! Those photos are stunning. When I saw the preview picture I assumed it was a stock photo. What memories too. I will check out the video. Thanks for sharing :)

Thank you! I've had some pretty amazing adventures in my life for sure. I love sharing my photos and stories with others, so thanks for reading AND leaving me an awesome comment as well!

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WOW!!! just WOW! I think I would have cried too!

That is beautiful and haunting all at the same time!

It was stunning. I am still in awe of just the memory of the beauty of the Bahamas in general, but this was my first real 'stunned' event!

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Thank you! It was a fantastic photo op that I had... pretty much every day for that whole year!

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The ship, as well as your description are totally awesome. I could feel myself there, experiencing this through your eyes. A great story!