Church -5minutefreewrite

in freewrite •  7 years ago 

For https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-117-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-church

Quiet as a churchmouse, was Charlotte. She walked tenderly through the fresh fallen snow, pausing only to ensure her hem was below her ankle, but above the snow. A freshly pressed skirt with damp hems would hardly do. Today was the day her favorite aunt arrived by postman's carriage from Chicago!

When Charlotte reached the end of the lane, she turned right. Miles of woods rarely broken by a path leading to another's cabin passed her by. The scent of pine was heavy in the air. Limbs drooped under their new weight, and a feeling of hush, of gentleness permeated her senses.

When at last she arrived at the general store, she was dismayed to find the postman's carriage already arrived. Charlotte nearly allowed herself to rush inside, but she put a hand on her heavy-beating heart, took a deep breath of the cold air now mixed with the smell of horses and

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I could feel Charlotte's surroundings and her heart beating so fast. Great description. I sure hope her aunt was waiting for her inside. Tip!
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Always wanting more! Fantastic job. I love how you took the prompt, different from most that automatically go to religion.

and...? I assume the point was to leave the reader wanting more, but that's kinda mean. with such a good momentum you had!

I'm only (half) joking. Awesome take on the prompt, loved it!

The time ran out! Feel free to finish if you're so inclined!

Thanks! I might :)

I really enjoyed reading and visualizing everything that Charlotte saw. You have a great way with description. You always leave us hanging!

And myself, I'm afraid!

okay, I'll check. thanks

You didn't vote on the name. do you want to? Please let me know.

I did! Did I do it wrong? I voted, #1 for freewriters, #2 for freewrite, and number 3 for... Freewritehaven, I think? I'm bw.

Yes, you are there. I thought that was Brisby. Going to update the names :)
Thank you. And I put out to have another round. Very good idea!! Thank you!

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nice post

improv please vot me