RE: Spanish Freewrite Nº 121 Mensaje diario de 5 minutos

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Spanish Freewrite Nº 121 Mensaje diario de 5 minutos

in freewrite •  6 years ago  (edited)

Hola a todos, os dejo mi aporte, el poema contiene las palabras Paños y Agrio,Saludos...
https://steemit.com/spanish/@jakim7/ansiedad-suspendida-poesia

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Cuando estoy ingrávida
permanezco adormecida
en laberintos humanos
que amarran mis manos.

Mientras no despierte
seré un grito inerte,
acechando tu suerte
distante no ausente.

Adormecida en la vertical
de este envoltorio carnal,
estoy atrapada y contenida
en lo profundo de tu vida.

No aceleres mis emociones
disfruta de mis vacaciones,
medita para que no regrese
aléjame para que no te bese.

No permitas que paños calientes
te Ilusionen con mi retirada,
soy una angustia enamorada
que ilusiona con pieles inocentes

Recuerda lo agrio de mi belleza,
no olvides que es mi naturaleza,
átame al suplicio de estas cuerdas,
sé que sufres y me recuerdas…


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      ·  6 years ago 

    Me encantan mucho tus poemas, tiene ese toque que te hace fundirte con el. Felicidades, continua así

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Muchas gras amiga, honrado por tan bellas palabras, tambien me encanta tu prosa y tus reflexiones, Saludos ;-)

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          ·  6 years ago 

        Estupendo freewrite poetry amigo...

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Gracias amigo... Saludos

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Felicitaciones me gusta mucho @jakim7

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Gracias estimado amigo, Saludos

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