IN THE BLUES OF THE OCEAN

in freewrite •  6 years ago 

Hey everyone! @mannyz here. Let me say, I feel very delighted to participate today's 5minutes freewrite by @mariannewest. The prompt is 'blues', so enjoy the poem!!!
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The sky was so blue
and the sea was so grey
the discord wouldn't be suprised
for they with words unread

what sickened his mind was the shrambles
of broken glasses the men at sea
may have dropped into the waters
on a drunken night without bliss

Or the mere view of a lady
with enlarged shadows
like a mighty sea horse
whose tail is trapped in the dust of the oceans

@mannyz

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This is a great poem @mannyz, and what an amazing view!! Where is that picture from?

Great poem. Thanks for sharing.

Anyway, I'm popping in with today's prompt: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-273-5-minute-freewrite-thursday-prompt-mishap

Also, be sure and join us the the @FreeWriteHouse
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