“No, no, no. You don’t understand. Your approach is too banal, too trivial. Let’s stop this good guy/bad guy template. What? If he’s working as a hitman, he supposed to be a monster? It’s just a job, the job you understand! You, for example, you work as an operator. You filming the movie scenes. What kind of eyes do you have? Does this really matter? You can have any eyes and so does he, the hitman.
Huh? No… No ifs or buts. You will do what I will tell you to do and that’s that. It’s my way of the highway. Is that understood? Great! I am glad we are in an agreement.
So, that’s how I envision the entire scene. The camera pans through the edge of the roof, tilts down to show the target, and then it rotates to the sharpshooter. Of course, he’s in all black robe and his eyes are only chinks. He takes the aim and shoots. The target is down. Then he quickly disassembles the gut, puts it inside the gun box. He is ready to go. Then he calmly takes the mask off. The camera shows the close up of his warm amber eyes.”
@mariannewest in #freewrite