RE: Spanish Freewrite Nº 84 Mensaje diario de 5 minutos

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Spanish Freewrite Nº 84 Mensaje diario de 5 minutos

in freewrite •  7 years ago 

Hola, saludos a todos los freewriters. Mi participación del día de hoy:
https://steemit.com/spanish/@oscarina/mi-duelo-poema

MI DUELO

Triste por tu partida,
de duelo mi corazón
¿Cómo olvidarte, mi vida?
sin perder yo la razón.

Me duele tu lejanía,
mi alma está hoy de duelo,
en mí no hay ya alegría,
solo queda desconsuelo.

Espero pronto regreses
a mis brazos desiertos,
y ardientemente me beses
con tus labios inexpertos...

@oscarina

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Felicitaciones, muy bueno @oscarina, yo apenas estoy aprendiendo y veo que ustedes son unos maestros.

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        ·  6 years ago 

      Yo también estoy en ese proceso de aprendizaje, pero es cierto lo que dices entre los freewriters hay verdaderos maestros... Gracias por el comentario @larryparra, saludos¡

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Buen aporte @oscarina muy sensible.

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            ·  6 years ago 

          Como siempre, tan amable, te agradezco el tiempo que tomas en leerme y tus alentadores comentarios @saulos, mis saludos¡

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              ·  6 years ago 

            Bellisimo poema estimada @oscarina me gusta mucho, Saludos...

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                ·  6 years ago 

              Me alegra que haya sido de tu agrado @jakim7, saludos y nos seguimos leyendo¡

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                  ·  6 years ago 

                Muy apasionada tu rima y muy bonito mensaje. Gracias por compartir.

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                    ·  6 years ago 

                  Gracias a ti por la lectura @lilianmacias

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                      ·  6 years ago 

                    Que excelente poema @oscarina, te felicito por tu escrito

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                        ·  6 years ago 

                      Gracias por tu lectura y comentario @miguelvalerio29

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                          ·  6 years ago 

                        Esa conjunción entre alma y corazón que la vida nos vuelve añitos... Excelente!!

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