WEDNESDAY'S FREE WRITE
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DAILY PROMPT: LEERING
There she stood leering into the distance in one of those comfortable stares you cant seem to break away from but the look on her face said different. With a look of complete bewilderment, it was more than a stare. It was conscious. What is she looking at I wondered.
I decided to make the uphill trek to where she stood. I mean why not. It is a free country and there are people scattered here and there. Maybe I'll mosey on up there and see what all the face is about.
I hobble my way up there. A slow grade increases into that of a 12 pitch roof. Dam I'm tired. I really want to see what's shes looking at though... My determination is greater when there is curiosity involved. So she needs to keep her face very perplexed or I may not make it.
The wind is strong and my cheeks feel chapped and then it hit me, a gusty swirl that just about turned me upside down.
I got there and my face turned equally perplexed, equally we leer into this hole. A huge crater and the wind was exacerbated by its presence. If this hole wasnt here, I wonder if the wing would have been so strong. I turned to look at the woman who stood leering out into the vast expanse of this hole and she was gone.
I hurried and turned my head to see if she had had enough and perhaps she was starting the long grade down. Going down will be much easier I thought but not easy enough for her to just dissapear.... oh no, did she end up down there.
It was then when I noticed out of NOWHERE a train car. An old wooden train car. Surely I would have noticed this when I came to gaze. It was like it popped out of nowhere; this little time machine.
My curiosity got the best of me so I decided to have a look. After all maybe this is where the woman went. Still so perplexed at her sudden vanishing, I carefully took a peek inside.
It was then the train came alive. I heard people chatting, glasses toasting and the paint became new again. I decided to sit there. It came alive and it started to go. I thought, will I miss everyone.; maybe. It's too late to jump off. I wont know what year I am in.. I wonder where the woman went.
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(All pictures and gifs made by myself, 2017)
It is a shame that the time was up ! Your story was drawing me in. Very clever freewrite. I am sure that @mariannewest is very proud of your work!
Who was that woman leering at? Was it a handsome young man? Did she just have a thing for trains? Oh, hopefully there will be a sequal to satisfy my curiosity.
Thank you for sharing your writing talents with all of us on the last #PYPT Show. Don't be a stranger! Hope to see you this upcoming Thursday!
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I think that maybe that woman is the ghost of me. The strength to do the walk. She was leering at what we would all assume was the big crater but in reality it was the ghost of me leading me to explore and continue to push foreward no matter how hard it can get. The train car was a time machine to better days in the past, or future. "Pain pain, go away. Come again another day" thank you for your thoughtful words. They are much appreciated
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Aww you look so cute in that dress and hat. Where was this again?
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That was about 4 years ago too. You see I do the 5 monute story, then go back through memories and share photos
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It's so cool to see your daily posts 😊😊
Saw this on #PYPT
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In one ward nice dear
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