Kate groaned and pulled her knees toward her chest. The party had been great. Too great. She and her roommate had gorged themselves on hors d’oeuvres and talk and, eventually, one too many cocktails. Her stomach churned and threatened to explode while her head felt as though it were swimming in a glass of Sazerac.
"I feel like a bloated whale," Sheena said suddenly.
"A bloated, beached whale," agreed Kate.
"Shtranded on the sand," Sheena sang, the alcohol slurring her speech a little.
"A bloated whale, stranded on the sofa," Kate groaned.
Sheena laughed, the alcohol in her system making the situation far more amusing than it otherwise would have been. Kate tried to unfold herself and give Sheena a pitiful glare, but the motion caused a wave of nausea to crash into her.
"And those little shtuffed mushroomsh were plankton," laughed Sheena.
The thought of seafood intensified the nausea and Kate fought desperately to keep her food down.
"Bloated whalesh, shtranded on the sofa with shtuffed mushroom planktonsh shwimming in their belliesh," Sheena sang.
All at once, the nausea and indigestion hit its peak and Kate scrambled to the bathroom.
Note: What a tough prompt! This probably isn't the most creative story, but I'm still pretty happy with how it turned out. :-)
As always, this prompt was posted by @mariannewest and can be found here.
Image sourced from Pixabay.
Nice, but I'd just finished my breakfast. :-)
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Haha, sorry!
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I'm AMAZED at what you came up with!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Bravo!!! and LOVE the drunk'en speech :D cracked me up!!!
do NOT sell yourself short!!
*Sorry I'm out of VP but really wanted to come read everyone's #freewrites.
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A fantastic effort @saryn - you built your way up to the prompt magnificently.
Here's today's prompt:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-89-5-minute-freewrite-tuesday-prompt-check-below
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I like the direction that you took! I'm giggling over the thought of a group of drunk and overfed friends hanging about. At least she made it to the bathroom!
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