The paint ran down the wall like tears slowly down a face covering all in its path with its inkiness and glue like texture. The color was black. The depth of which was seen only in dreams had late at night when the moon was hiding its face.
It started as a drip, built into a stream, moving faster and faster, widening out, moving along, covering more and more.
No one noticed when the paint started making it's journey down until it was too late. The blackness had spread too far. It would never be able to be cleansed all away.
A sad state of affairs, to the one looking on, seeing such a thing of potential beauty being covered by the deep, dark blackness.
How does it happen, not able to see what is right in front of you? Only that person knows. It is their story to tell when the time comes.
Until that happens to pass, hard work, determination, and pain will be needed to start the cleaning process. It might even take a lifetime.
I'm hoping not.
Snook
I love this. :) I'm really enjoying how each prompt unfolds, always different for each freewriter.
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One of the things I love best!!!! and why I never try and not read other freewrites until mine is done so it's my own thoughts not others I'm using.
Thank YOU so much for stopping and reading!!
and THANK YOU so much for liking my story!! Means a lot to me!!
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Wow Sis, you dove deep today into a sticky subject and came out on the other side high and dry. That is a wonderful testament to your ability to paint a colorful picture of something so dark and serious. I have seen others attempt such a feat only to come out looking cracked and flaky. Good job!
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Thank you, Mr. Punny LOLLL you really crack me UP!! and I'm SO S very happy you liked it!! hugs
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You know, when I read your stories, I hear your voice in my head!
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I LOVE knowing that <3 Thank YOU so much for sharing that with me hugs
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Amazing imagery here...I could really imagine the paint dripping down like that!
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Thank YOU so MUCH @snrm!!!!! YOU made me very happy :D I'm trying to get better at adding imagery into my stories now......... so it meant a lot your comment!! but they always do!!
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Glad I could make your day :).
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Wow, that is deep! I had black nail polish spill on my white trash can once. It never did come clean. I just face that side toward the wall so no one can see it. :) Good freewrite!
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yeah, black never comes out of stuff LOLLL
and Thank You!!! for everything today ✿
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You are welcome. Thank you for taking over the technical stuff :D
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Definitely felt like an image from a fantasy or black-hole sci fi. Question tho: the beginning, the end, or the middle?
Oh, and your dragon feels like it should be in the Dragonriders of Pern. Very cool.
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Thanks!!! about my dragon!! it's from a game I play called Rift!! That is me as my Warrior avatar. I played for 4 years. Thought today she should show her face. I'm happy you like it!! 😁
and very great question!! I'm not sure but you gave me something to think about as I think it could be any one of those! LOLL
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Very abstract, visual and allegorical freewrite, with a dark perspective on human life mistakes (that's at least what I understood). Brava super snookie!
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Thank You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ✿
I love when you interpret my writing. 😁 and you are mostly correct!! hugs
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Ooooh. This is a big metaphor. But, for what?
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it IS 😁
and only @brisby knows LOLLLL
and remind me never to have you check for typo's for me LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL hugs
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I hope not as well sweet Snook. Perhaps the realization will come that a mistake was made, that misunderstandings have happened, and one will have the grace to admit that they were wrong. That in their journey to better themselves, there was a horrible misstep that needs rectifying. Or, maybe they won't and will forever be stuck with that aching pinch in the Great One's jockstrap. Their loss (and it is a huge loss).
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