After the last chord, Donnie Caruso put down the guitar and grabbed the mic.
“Thank you very much, guys,” he said, and then, loudly: “Bang.”
“Are you OK, buddy?” said Jimmy from the console.
“Totally! That was a great soundcheck, wasn’t it?”
“Indeed.”
Donnie smiled. As he went backstage, he patted on his pocket. The .38 was there: loaded, shiny, ready.
More like a 1 Minute Freewrite, actually.
Picture from Wikimedia. Many thanks to @mariannewest.
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Ha! LOL!! 😂 "& @f3nix wins the day!!"
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XD Brisbelia!
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At the first read, I thought Donnie was soundchecking for the gun shot, since he said "bang", but it's Jimmy who's got the gun...I dont'get it
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Indeed, there was a mistake. Donnie had the gun. It doesn't make sense anyway. Sorry.
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Aaah...I was feeling dumb for not understanding your clever writing! ;)
Now it makes sense for me! It would be a memorable show!
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Wow! You've my mind racing! Who is the gun for? Great story with so few words!
Today I am Marianne's specially programmed robotic delivery squirrel. I'm scampering through the freewriters, bringing our lady's next creative prompt.
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-85-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-corn
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