I really liked how all these different stories really have their own vibe and their own style of writing and how easily you seem to switch between them. And you really dragged me in, especially Eve's story was thrilling so far. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of it :)
I also read that you have trouble ending stories sometimes, I can relate to that... But I tend to only publish stuff that is finished, polished, edited (and leave stuff for way too long and never show it to anyone). So I admire you for starting and publishing things that aren't done yet :) I'm not brave enough for that.
Oh and thanks for the wonderful compliment :)