Mackerel and cheese. Love is a disease.

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careless idiot


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as she descends
wings wide, unbend
then she smiles
a spark shines,
quickly snubbed.
spark nonetheless
look at her smile
doesn't she riles,
the red in peace?
doesn't her face
echoes with grace
and for a while
the swinging bass
skip a beat?
Careless smiles
like that is crime
In grim my heart grimes
and I don't have time
for the silly fireworks.



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This is my day 68 entry of the 100 days of poetry by @d-pend from SteemitSchool.

If you like what I'm doing here, help me out to get me some visibility and add me to your steemvoter or bring me a @curie vote like at rasamuel@discord did which @f3nix thought I deserved and supported me through frustration. It's been more than four month of this.
goddamnit.

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This was a beautiful read. I found you through the #payitforward contest. You were featured by @f3nix. Congratulations and all the best.

Thanks for visiting. I write poems for those on the go. You can visit my blog for all sorts of wacky themes. I am glad you enjoyed.

Wanted to let you know that I found your post from @f3nix's Entry Post to the Pay It Forward Curation Contest.

It was a most pleasant surprise. @f3nix has been a valuable friend here at steemit.

Interesting read, I have to check out more of your poetry entries.
I found you through the #payitforward contest. You were featured by @f3nix
~ErodedThoughts

I write for those on the go and change my write with the flow.
If you enjoy nihilism in cup or science with straw come back for more.

@f3nix featured you in the Pay It Forward curation contest week 7 . This is what brought me to your post

will the post be keeping you here, I wonder.
please feel free to point out my blunder.

The majority of my time and support goes to the community of Pay it Forward and Steemit Greeters Guild and ASAPERS Being a member of one or all the communities helps with exposure and engagement . I know @f3nix through the communities and have engaged with him many times over the past couple of months . As you know he holds contests . I have seen you there before . The rest of my time is spent on the newbies that arrive here on this platform .

Who I follow is not done through my following list but through Ginabot and steemworld . I would recommend that you join the communities and get involved. Power up the first goal is to reach 500 VP . Its hard I know . Be consistent and it will all come your way . I look forward to seeing you in one or all the communities .

Some relationships have excitement and some comfort. The best have both. The worse are like a disease for sure. Interesting write and word choice, FSO:)

Thanks for visiting @prydefoltz. :)

A nice poem, and I kind of liked the pictures too. Simple, yet telling. Timid heart to electrified, pretty nice. I found your post via @f3nix featuring you in her "Pay it Forward" contest entry.

Thanks for visiting. I write poems for those on the go. You can visit my blog for all sorts of wacky themes. I am glad you enjoyed.