RE: The temple of ashes

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The temple of ashes

in gedwriting •  8 years ago 

This is a great story ! Great emotion depicted and a great climax - only thing that I can suggest, is maybe, do not conclude so fast. Otherwise, great post ! Love it !

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@sebastian-jacobs Thank you for the comment. :-) Appreciate the advice.