A poem by naltedtirt

in goodbye •  5 years ago 

this dreary day i ask to end
another friend has stepped aside
and parted ways with me again
as with the changing of the tide.

my glass in hand will i raise high
to say a final toast to you
and whisper one last trembling sigh
i say "my once true, friend.....adieu."

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Hello friends, nothing is wrong so no worries. This is a poem I wrote once upon a time when I was down. I thought it too good and sad to be locked away somewhere. I liked the way each line had 8 syllables.

I have others...none as sad as this. Most are more cheerful.

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I don't have tip but here's an upvote 😊 nicely written!

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I dont expect a tip sweet Vangie. I am trying to experiment with @tipu. Once I figure it out I will be able to deposit into tipu and tip my friends for their hard work.

ahh.....how does it work? tipu in malay language means lying/trick/cheat...

LOL Tip in English means to give extra compensation. LIke tipping in a restaurant.

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I see you discovered the popcorn.

Lol i went a little crazy with it this time lol

This is really beaitiful- brought a tear to my eye. Thank you for posting that second bit, I was about to rush over and DM you to check you're okay 😂 e x

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Sorry if I scared you my friend. It means a lot to me that you would react like that. I figured I better put the second part just in case.

Beautiful words. ❤️

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Thank you so much!! Thanks for the kind comment and for stopping by. I appreciate it.

I am following btw. Am interested in seeing some of your posts.

Thank you and ditto ☺️

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