WINTER
glistening flakes fall
beautiful in the cold air
white, pure, and peaceful
SPRING
raindrops through sunbeams
bringing down the kiss of life
waking new blossoms
SUMMER
laying in the grass
the day warm and comforting
perfection achieved
AUTUMN
brown, orange, and red
colors of the fading days
soon all will be white
Nice poetry. I can tell you put a lot of thought in to each line and you have captured each of the seasons nicely.
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Thank you. I live in NY and I really don't think winter is ever going to end this year! These haiku are a combination of nostalgia and wishful thinking. I did put a lot of thought into them trying to present an image to the reader of how I feel about each. Thanks for noticing and commenting. Always appreciated.
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No problem. It is already in the 90s where I live so winter is long gone.
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