Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #5

in haikucontest •  6 years ago  (edited)

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Los pensamientos que me evoca esta imagen son los referidos a la niñez, la inocencia y los sueños de niño, donde la imaginación vuela. La casa en el árbol, el columpio y la grama del suelo, que invitan a correr y jugar. Bonito espacio para una foto.

Mi haiku ofrecido lo escribo basada en la imagen presentada utilizando mi idioma original, el español, y respetando la composición tradicional del Haiku que debe estar compuesto, como lo proponen ustedes en las cláusulas del concurso: por 3 versos sin título. El primer verso debe tener 5 sílabas de largo, el segundo verso debe tener 7 sílabas de largo y el tercer verso debe tener 5 sílabas de largo nuevamente. Con estas normas lo construí en español, la traducción no respeta el número de sílabas.

Sombras de árbol.
El sol trae al jardín
la inocencia.

SEPARADORES grama.png

The thoughts that this image evokes are those related to childhood, innocence and child dreams, where the imagination flies. The house in the tree, the swing and the grass of the ground, that invite to run and play. Nice space for a photo.

My offered haiku I write based on the image presented using my original language, Spanish, and respecting the traditional Haiku composition that should be composed, as you propose in the clauses of the contest: for 3 verses without title. The first verse must have 5 syllables long, the second verse must have 7 syllables long and the third verse must have 5 syllables long again. With these rules I built it in Spanish, the translation does not respect the number of syllables.

Tree shadows
The sun brings to the garden
innocence

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Thank you for the haiku and for the explanation, that makes your composition a haibun, and it adds value to the post!

(Marco)

Thanks for your comment, and I like to participate elaborating haiku

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Your haiku is lovely and I like that you wrote of the innocence and imagination from childhood.d