RE: Mizu No Oto- Every Image Has Its Haiku

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Mizu No Oto- Every Image Has Its Haiku

in haikucontest •  5 years ago 

Hahah look where my photos end! How poor these winemakers in the north-east of Italy, aren't they (I'm not one of them, unfortunately, I just drink their wine).

Refreshing and delicate haiku, there's hosomi and karumi in it. Although I don't like similes that much in haiku, in this case it was a nice surprise.

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How poor these winemakers in the north-east of Italy

I should have guessed it was a vineyard! The garden area you can see off the the left, I imagined as beans growing up poles, is grapes. Nice, I wish we could grow grapes here, one of my favorite fruits :) Iy could probably work with grapes also...

vines run wild -
sun-kissed buds burst open
as birds chorus

Here's another for you. This is in October, a more appropriate and haikable season for those places 😉

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Burnt umber leaves
Shelter grapes blossoming -
Earth born harvest.

😉👍🙂

Yes this is much better! There has been so much work done pruning: grapes, trees, hedges. But no beans!

Ah... but what about jack and his magic beans!!! 😉