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Pregnant Earth and Sky
Red across the gray Divide
Streak of sacred Blood
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This is my entry to the Mizu No Oto Week #1 Contest, and also probably my first real haiku :)
My Haiku for Mizu No Oto
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Very very original concept and symbolism.. makes my photo look like a contemporary art painting.
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The more I stared at your photo the more I liked it. It's got so much openness and gray and symmetry
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Wanna revive paintings based on photos?
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Your haiku transpires yugen, it's like the appearence of a kami spirit.
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Your comment is almost itself like ethereal poetry :P Thank you!
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Thank you kindly!
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Great lines! I like how you see fullness where others wouldn't! I wish I knew more about haiku to be able to give you a better comment but I don't.
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I wish I knew more about haiku to be able to write better ones, but thank you!
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