RE: Happy

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Happy

in happy •  9 years ago 

Actually, you nailed it. You spotted where the story needs to build up. Your comment as a reader matters. I wIll surely work on it. It only started as a facebook post.

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As for the first part, it has to be in the past tense because i am given a second chance and brought back to restart again