Easy to read and interesting.
An error:
In order to elevate some of your concerns
Elevate means to raise, to make higher. In other words, you want to make us be even more concerned! Maybe 'lower' or 'reduce' would be better (you can still Edit your post and fix it).
Thank you I ment alleviate. I appreciate any input that can improve my writing.
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