Once Upon a Heartbreak

in heartbreak •  7 years ago  (edited)


I guess it was just a misunderstanding.
A lack of communication on both ends.
My love for you was as deep as the ocean,
And I mistakenly expected the same from you.
What I didn't realize was that you are not the beautiful vast blue abyss I thought I was so easily falling into.
And when the tide comes and pulls you away from me, you do not return with the waves.
Suddenly I found myself futilely searching for you,
Lost in a sea I no longer recognized.
It was never you.
Because when I reached for your hand to pull me from the swirling waves, you were nowhere to be found.
I realized I was drowning, but not in your love...
In your animosity.

~Granegvesky

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Very nice! Let's hope love isn't forever bleak ;)

soo lovely, is this written by you?

Yes it's original!

you write great!

Just so people can know this is original content that you wrote, you can do what i did by tagging the originalworks bot. Beautiful poem

That's awesome! Thank you!

Great poem. I am delighted, really...

Oh [email protected] are awesome. Waves of emotions came over me and I felt the heartbreak, the deep let down and disappointmen, the lonliness. I've been there and got the T-shirt. Write On...I would love to hear more.

Thank you! That is my biggest goal, to let others feel the emotion in my words. It makes me so happy knowing you felt that!