RE: SLC S22 Week 1 - Herbs for children

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SLC S22 Week 1 - Herbs for children

in herbalmed-s22w1 •  2 days ago 

Hi, @drhira, Thank you for participate in the herbal medicine week 1.

Here is the review of your post participation.

1. Teething Remedy: (2/3 Marks)

Dear Student You have developed a remedy for children's toothache in which you have added coconut oil and cloves.
But you have not explained the benefits of this remedy here and you have not told how to apply it on the teeth and how many minutes to apply it.
You have also not written the benefits of coconut oil and cloves.

2. Research Assignment: (1.5/2 Marks)

Here you have written three safe herbs for children.
You have also written how it affects children and their benefits.
But no picture of any herb has been posted. It is present in every house and is easily available. You could have posted their pictures easily.

3. Herbal Remedy for Bedwetting: (1.5/3 Marks)

You have developed a remedy for children's bedwetting problem in which you have added only one herb, cinnamon.
But you have not written here the benefits of cinnamon, how it solves the bed-wetting problem in children, you have also shown the step-by-step method of making it and also shown a video.
To make any prescription, its description is very important, especially its benefits, its quantity and for how many days it has to be used or how many times a day it has to be used, all these things are very important.

4. Accuracy and Creativity: (1.5/2 Marks)

I hope you have learned a lot about herbal medicine.

Total Marks6.5/10
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