Psychosomatic

in hiphop •  7 years ago 

psychosomatic

(of a physical illness or other condition) caused or aggravated by a mental factor such as internal conflict or stress.
“her doctor was convinced that most of Edith’s problems were psychosomatic”

relating to the interaction of mind and body.

My Debut Album is in the works with production from Steve D of Fresh Eire,
heres the first demo track off it. Wouldnt let me embed it. Let me know what you think.
Really need feedback on this one.

https://willygmusic.bandcamp.com/track/your-on-your-own

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Sounds REALLY GOOD! maybe just some final mixing and mastering in my opinion! I'm not an expert on those but I think at least the vocals should come foreward a bit more somehow. Such an epic beat and it fits your flow really well. And most importantly for me you really know how to delivier a message with solid bars!

Thanks Privat! It isnt mixed or mastered at all, just a rough version till I get some feedback. I was worried the content of the verses didnt fit the vibe of the beat, I think i messed up the delivery on a couple of lines too. I had a message though, took hours to write the bars so that they were both solid, and delivered the message too. Im glad it sounds good man, thanks for the feedback!

Nice can't wait for a cleaned up version then. You probably know best if you could do a better delivery on a couple of lines but to me it sounds good so far. And I liked how you matched the lyrical content with the vibe of the beat. Keeping the overall epicness as the verses are reflective but the chorus gets more inspirational. Thanks for sharing and don't forgot to post it when it's done as well :)

Cheers man, its definitely going on the album then when its done! I cant believe steve, the guy who made the beat, thought it was a weak beat! We can both agree its an epic beat! I just gotta find someone who will mix the final version now cuz steve lost all his plug ins upgrading to a new mac. Im satisfied with the tune i think, was worried the verses were too heavy for the beat but if it works then its all good! Ill definitely share it on here when its ready

Haha definately not weak! I hope you have at least the beat and the vocals rendered separatly if the project doesn't work anymore :) And that someones willing to help soon. I would if I was better at it but still learning