Bahasa Indonesia
Aku terjatuh bersama daun kering yang gugur dari ranting pohon, sang daun terbang terbawa angin, aku mendarat, masuk ke dalam situasi yang sempit, dikelilingi tembok. Aku mengalami ketidakbebasan dalam bergerak, dan pandanganku pun terbatas, tetapi aku melihat celah di depanku, seperti sebuah pintu keluar, namun setelahnya ada tembok lain lagi. Aku belum tahu kemana arah yang seharusnya aku jalani. Suatu hal yang masih aku syukuri adalah cadangan makanan di dalam perutku masih cukup untuk beberapa waktu, yang bisa menjagaku tetap memiliki tenaga untuk berusaha melewati lorong kecil yang membuat sesak ini.
Gunakan jarimu, carikan rute yang benar, aku menunggu petunjukmu.
English
I fell down with a dry leaf that had fallen from a tree branch, the leaf flew away with the wind, I landed, into a narrow situation, surrounded by walls. I had no freedom of movement, and my vision was limited, but I saw an opening in front of me, like an exit, but after it was another wall. I didn't know where I was supposed to go yet. One thing I was grateful for was that I still had enough food reserves in my stomach to last me for some time, which could keep me energized to try and make it through this claustrophobic little passage.
Use your finger, find the right route, I await your guidance.
Bahasa Indonesia
Dengan penuh cinta,
Wahai semut sahabatku, ketika kamu membaca surat ini aku berharap kesehatanmu telah lebih membaik, perjuangan menyelamatkan diri sendiri dari tempat yang sunyi itu pasti menguras pikiran dan energimu, namun aku tahu kamu semut yang sangat kuat, tidak pernah mengeluh dan pantang menyerah, aku salut kepadamu.
Aku harus jujur bahwa banyak kesan baik yang aku dapatkan dan aku pelajari darimu, kesungguhanmu dan kedisiplinanmu dalam menjalankan tugas dari sang ratu menjadi contoh yang baik tentang bagaimana mengemban sebuah tanggung jawab dalam hidup. Pengorbananmu untuk koloni tidak perlu diragukan lagi, kejadian yang menimpamu ini telah menjadi bukti.
Saling berbagi, oh itu indah sekali, kamu bersama teman-temanmu telah menjadi inspirasi, di saat-saat ketamakan sedang menyelimuti dunia ini. Sahabatku, ketika nanti kita bertemu lagi, di kursi taman kecil biru muda, tunjukkan kepadaku lebih banyak lagi, tentang saling percaya, tentang tumbuh bersama, dan bagaimana nikmatnya bersyukur.
Sahabatmu,
@fajrularifst
English
With love,
O ant my friend, when you read this letter I hope your health has improved, the struggle to save yourself from that desolate place must have drained your mind and energy, but I know you are a very strong ant, never complain and never give up, I salute you.
I have to be honest that there are many good impressions I got and learned from you, your earnestness and discipline in carrying out tasks from the queen became a good example of how to take on a responsibility in life. Your sacrifice for the colony is unquestionable, this incident that happened to you has become proof.
Sharing, oh that's so beautiful, you and your friends have been an inspiration, at a time when greed is enveloping this world. My friend, when we meet again, in the little light blue garden chair, show me more, about trusting each other, about growing together, and how delicious it is to be grateful.
Your best friend,
@fajrularifst
Bahasa Indonesia
Tubuh kecilnya memang telah terbenam, namun semangatnya akan terus menyebar. Jejak-jejak hidupnya banyak mengandung makna bagi yang benar memperhatikan secara saksama. Ia tidak butuh tangisan dan penghargaan, karena kemenangan abadi telah ia dapatkan. Ia sebenar-benar pejuang, Tidak kenal menyerah.
English
His small body may have sunk, but his spirit will continue to spread. The traces of his life are full of meaning for those who pay close attention. He doesn't need cries and accolades, because he has won an eternal victory. He was a true warrior, who never gave up.
It was an additional experience for me to learn something important about the point of view of writing. Being a narrator in three different conditions enriched my knowledge of writing techniques. Thanks to Mr. @joslud and Mrs. @solperez for providing this fun material.
I can explain that in the first story, I described an ant who was trapped in a difficult situation, but he did not want to give up, he had strong confidence in himself to find a way out, and invites readers to join in the thinking. In the second story, I expressed the feelings of a person who wanted to provide encouragement and moral support for his friend who was weak and helpless so that he could recover soon. In the third story, I wanted to introduce to everyone who came that the buried ant had carved out a good life record and should be emulated, not just remembered.
The images about ants above are artworks from @tezzmax for the learning challenge of write in micro size.
I would like to invite @irawandedy @aneukpineung78 and @miftahulrizky to join this course.
Hi, @fajrularifst
I am sharing a brochure with your creations. This format is for you to share on your networks.
Check if you see any errors that need to be corrected, let me know.
I invite you to join this group on Facebook where you can post it yourself.
https://www.facebook.com/share/g/eEvhcDKqQXssKeQJ/
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Terimakasih undangannya, saudaraku. Semoga sukses selalu bagimu.
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Confidence is the essence of life and I can say if someone is full of confidence he will never fail in his life come what may. If a person has learned the value of confidence he will come out of the worst situations maybe with a few dents yet successful.
#microwrite02 @joslud @solperez
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¡Saludos amigo!🤗
Las hormigas se desorientan terriblemente cuando caen bien sea de un árbol como de las flores. Es más, he leído que un número considerado de ellas no vuelven a su colonia porque en esa caída pierden todos los sentidos que ya tenían memorizado.
La hormiga es un insecto que no se da por vencida... Eso me ha conllevado a tenerla como ejemplo en cuanto a la tenacidad porque colgar la toalla, es algo que no debemos hacer de buenas a primeras.
Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚
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Hola amigo, hay un toque descriptivo en la primera tarea y me agrada, me gusta la línea final aunque involucras a una tercera persona sino es así, fue error del traductor.
Hermoso mensaje en la tarea 2, escribes con sentimiento a la hormiga y llega, En la tarea 3 sin duda la narración en tercera persona y tus raíces religiosas están presentes,me gustó leer , me sentí a gusto y la reflexión inspira.
@joslud @solperez
#microwrite02
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Terimakasih untuk kata-katamu 🙏🏼
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Me encanto tu historia, es muy hermoso el lenguaje utilizado es como poesía, y también me deja una sensación de aliento y esperanza. Es como la historia de un héroe, y lo has desarrollado muy bien.
Solo por curiosidad, cual narrador te resulto más fácil y cual más difícil?
Te deseo mucho éxito en el curso.
@joslud @solperez #microwrite02
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Terimakasih, semoga kebaikan terus menyertai Anda 🙏🏼
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