Heart reflection

in hive-107855 •  11 days ago 

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In the increasingly silent night
Lara whispered into the recesses of my heart
Like endless rain
Seeping into the depths of the earth
No light in the corner of my vision
Only a glimpse of shadows
Every step feels heavier
Dragging time with a strong foothold

But in every teardrop
There is strength born from wounds
Like dew on the tip of a fragile leaf
Although it falls but never wavers
A feeling of fatigue hits the soul and body
But the determination in my heart remains burning
Every breath is a prayer
Getting closer to the universe

Hot weather is not an obstacle
The wind is strong hitting the body
Although sweat continues to pour
But there is no doubt at all
High peaks will continue to be climbed
Feet are not afraid to step for sure
Mountains are like true friends
Meet there to keep promises

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Greetings

Dear friend your loved fill poetry just out of words although Lara wishpered you but you poetry shows your love is so deep filled with sorrow and the being living far.

Your heart reflection shows me you have great love with her but why the distances are there and your words are showing a feeling of sadness to me.

Love when in heart is really beautiful even you can feel her wishpered and love in soul although the distance of miles may be there but love bond is unique.

May I ask where is Lara now why you feel so lonely in love?

Have a lovely day.

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Thank you very much, we are very good

  ·  7 days ago (edited)

Hello, what a pleasure to read your poem which transmits a lot of feeling, that energy full of courage necessary to face everything especially in difficult times. It reminds us of experiences in the environment.

On this side of the world we are also fortunate to have the legacy of outstanding writers of poems that have inspired us such as Pablo Neruda, Mario Benedetti, Federico Garcia Lorca among others and do you admire a particular writer of poems?

An image that I love and share, because we can always start again.See you soon!

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A good comment, I hope you receive an answer!
A great day to you dear.

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