Hello @rinkisaxena,
Thank you for taking interest in the 2nd Task of the Beginners’ class. Your grades are as follows:

Criteria	Calculation
Presentation/Use of Markdowns	2/2
Compliance with Topic	2/2
Quality of Analysis	2/2
Clarity of Language	1.5/2
Originality	2/2
Total	9.5/10

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The following caught my attention:

I will increase employment, income and vision of a company to grow more in the upcoming years.

That's correct! People can be employed from anywhere in the world. Steemit, for example, has its country reps and professors working from different parts of the world.

co-financing or co-creation plans through which the clients take part in offering types of assistance

Very good! The public can easily pull their funds together for a cause. The transparency of the system in this case will make people trust the process better.

It will reduce paperwork and save environment.

Yes. Papers will not be needed because anybody can access the required data anytime. Less papers means less cutting of trees.

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Feedback and Suggestions

• You are a great writer! Not only was your work educating but it was also very neat and appealing to read. Great job!

• You have a good mastery of markdowns. Keep it up!

• Try to proofread to correct some mistakes. Also try to use simpler sentences in order not to confuse your reader.

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Thanks again as we anticipate your participation in the next class.