Hi @brayan256, Thank you for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| The explanation of why whales are feared | |
| Taking advantages of the whales existence | |
| Graph analysis based on whales phases | |
| Selection of a cryptocurrency | |
| Graph analysis of selected cryptocurrencies | |
| Conclusion | |
| Procedure and structure of writing | |
| Follow Rules and Guidelines | |
My Review dan Suggestions:
For question number 1 it's fine, but it would be better if you show an example of a particular cryptocurrency experiencing a price increase/decrease caused by a whale, and it would be even better if you showed a screenshot of the news.
Put the image in the center of the page to make it look more professional.
It would be better if you explain in detail your intention to trade or invest in STEEM, for example, the profit percentage target you want to earn, your dominance as whales in STEEM, etc.
Use bullet points, numbered lists, etc. to highlight some important points.
Thank you so much professor @wahyunahrul for the review and the work you’re doing for the community. Stay blessed
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