Hi @kayduke, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Assessment Aspect | Score |
|---|---|
| Understanding Questions | 1/2 |
| Quality of Assignments | 0.8/2 |
| Writing Procedure and Structure | 0.3/1 |
| Follows Rules and Guidelines | 1/1.5 |
| Grammar and clarity of information delivery | 0.6/1 |
| Effort in Submission of Information | 0.6/1.5 |
| #Club5050 | 1/1 |
| Total | 5.3/10 |
My Reviews and Suggestions:
Your explanation in question number 2 is still too short, and your explanation is too convoluted so it is difficult to understand.
The steps for creating an account that you show are complete and clear.
Your explanation in question number 6 is still too shallow.
Your writing structure can still be improved.
Don't get into the habit of using markdown quotes for each discussion title, use header variations so that the title can be seen clearly.
There are some paragraphs that are too long, try to separate them into several paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Try writing articles that are left and right aligned, learn how to use markdown again.
I still see that there are some grammars that are still wrong, try using Grammarly to help correct the wrong grammar.