RE: Crypto Academy Week 4 // Decentralized Finance Systems// Submitted to @yohan2on

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Crypto Academy Week 4 // Decentralized Finance Systems// Submitted to @yohan2on

in hive-108451 •  4 years ago 

Hi @bleesyn

Thanks for attending the 4th-week Crypto course and for your effort in doing the homework task.

Feedback/suggestions/corrections
You simply tried the homework task. You had plenty of typing errors, grammatical errors.

For instance in this text;

A marker can be described as Etherum based organization in which the Dia and the marker token operate. Dia is markers stable coin. A stable coin is that coin that maintains its price, same as the USD . Marker exist to normalize, stabilize the price of Dia against its dollar

Change Dia to DAI
Change Etherum to Ethereum
Change Marker to Maker

You need to always proofread your work to identify and correct any mistakes that you might have made along the way.

Your explanations were not very clear. You need to put in more effort in your research work coupled with some writing skills inorder to present your articles in a much better appealing state.

Well tried though, just keep improving on those highlighted areas.

Homework task
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Thank you sir, I will do that