Creative Writing “The Pain”

in hive-109934 •  6 months ago  (edited)

Finally, the day arrived. It was time for my baby to enter the world, after months of waiting, excitement, and curiosity. However, no one had prepared me for the journey that would change my life forever. It was an unusual experience for me.

It began as a slight pain, similar to a muscle cramp, which I could easily manage. But, gradually, the sensation grew stronger as if drums were being played in my head. I remember what I learned in class and from my friends: "Breathe." Breathe in and out while focusing your mind on anything else. However, there came a time when I was unable to concentrate on breathing techniques or mental tricks. I had no more strength. Yes, I could not bear it.

As time passed, I felt like my entire body was working together to achieve a single goal. I realized I needed to get rid of the pain, so I closed my eyes since I knew it would make things worse. I felt as if I was at my limit, and I couldn't take another second. But, each time, I told myself that this suffering had a reason; it was for my baby. I felt relieved when I remembered my baby's face.

I held my husband's hand tightly, feeling a strange mix of fear and determination. He encouraged me by whispering that I was doing an incredible job. But I knew that this was a journey that he couldn’t understand even with his full backing. That type of pain was one that only moms could sense and experience.


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Yes, then arrived at the final stage, when all my body got exhausted, when the intensity peaked to a level, but I got the strength that I didn’t know that I had. I heard many voices around me guiding and encouraging me. I gather everything in me and focus on my task. Finally, I heard the voice I was looking for, my baby's cry.

Something incredible happened at exactly that moment. My entire discomfort faded away, replaced by pure relief and joy. When I looked at my baby, I realized how powerful love is, and all of my pain disappeared. I had passed through the fire of childbirth pain and emerged stronger on the other side.

When I looked back, I realized that labor pain was not just physical. It was a test of resilience, emotional strength, and patience. It trained me to handle any challenge that came my way. If a mother can endure that experience, she can handle any difficulty. True, it was very painful, but it was also beautiful, in its powerful way. I wear that memory as a badge of honor. I am glad to claim that I have the wonderful strength as do all mothers.

I would like to invite @josepha, @cruzamilcar63, and @elider11 to participate in this contest hosted by @sur-riti via the Creative Pulse community.

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Hola apreciado amigo. Gracias por tomarme en cuenta en tu publicación. Excelente relato
Es necesario comprender el dolor de un parto y como se traduce en amor y felicidad. Te deseo éxitos y bendiciones

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Thanks for the entry but you forget to put a link in contest post.
Thanks.

Oh! I will do that, thank you for reminding me, in my old age.

Who is old?
I dont think so. Age is only a number.

Making up your mind is great, but you have to accept reality.

Welcome , but I am also not young.

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El dolor del parto es uno de los más emblemáticos para la mujer, ya que eso significa que después vendrá el hijo al que le prodigará todo el amor de su alma y que le demostrará que ese sufrimiento vale la pena... Éxitos en el concurso. Saludos.

Thank you very much for reading my post and leaving your kind comment.

@senehasa,
How much pain do our sisters, mothers and daughters feel when they go through labor pains. You have portrayed it beautifully. In fact, I bow down to all women for going through this painful time and giving birth to children.
This is a very beautiful creation.

Understanding our anguish as mothers is not accepted by all men; only decent people acknowledge it. Reading and commenting are much appreciated. Have a wonderful day.

Thank you. I think we especially need to give these values ​​to our children, especially boys.

Of course.

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Thank you very much for the support.

First of all, I respect women a lot. The presentation you made today on the pain contest is painful for every mother. Only a mother can understand this pain, but it is much more painful than any other pain.

I am all of you who came into the world by hurting mother in this way. A mother can endure such hardships that she has to undergo the test of holding her stomach for 10 months and 10 days. I always want to salute women. Allah gave them a lot of support and love.

99% of every mother's pain goes away after seeing her child. A mother's cry after giving birth may not be a cry of pain by nature but to me it is a cry of joy, seeing the baby's face is one of the happiest moments in the world. Which only mothers can understand.

Good luck with the competition.

#wewrite

Thanks for positive feedback.

welcome ma'am