RE: Children playing on the sea shore of Sawang Blang nibong | Set 10% for account @hive111293

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Children playing on the sea shore of Sawang Blang nibong | Set 10% for account @hive111293

in hive-111293 •  3 years ago 

Welcome in the community, it's great to have you here.

I did enjoy reading your post, although, if I may suggest something, I would recommend cutting the number of photos by half in future publications (some of them are very similar to each other) and focusing on writing longer story, maybe describing the place or add some information that could be interesting for users from other parts of the world. I know it's difficult because it pushes out to look at our reality from a different perspective and ask ourselves what can be interesting or unusual for others, but it's achievable.

For instance, in one of the pictures you have people half-digged in the ground. From another user who was writing the post a few days ago, I have learned that it's a sort of treatment that helps to deal with the pain. I wouldn't know that if she wouldn't explain it. Thanks to her I have learned something new.

This post is plagiarism-free


I also encourage you to verify your account in our community and read about club5050 program and profits that brings participation in it

Have a great day!

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thank you @papi.mati maybe next week I'll try something better.