It is late night here, and I was in the mood of writing, I know that some of you my friends know that sometimes I write poems,so tonight I decided to write a new poem in the moment.
We wake up with light, the light of the sun
The only star that was a close friend with us
We step on the ground, the old place we born
The ancient lands we lived, still filled with life
Cultures they made, our ancestors from past
In wars and in peace, the story still exist
In the moment we see, we didnt expect to be
To be like the past, the story wont last
Discovering still, cause it's not the end
Our beliefs could be wrong, yet we might been descend
We made it so hard, to connecting our minds
With rules that we made, limited our own minds
I was wishing once, that we could be friends
A world full of love, in peace and with trust.
I hope you guys have a good day or night wherevee you are living my friends!
Regards,
Hermoso poema amigo David. La última foto está impresionante. Saludos
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Muchas gracias mi buena amiga, tu comentario me hizo feliz.
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The complexity of this poem has made me understand, respect and love poetry more, thank you @davidfar
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Thank you so much man :)
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Hello friend @davidfar, it is a wonderful poem, history is a part of the past but it does not define us, and we are the ones who trace this path.
Beautiful photographs.
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Thank you my friend, your kind comment means much to me. 💯🙏
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