The Kiss... A Short Story

in hive-111825 •  4 years ago 

I wrote this story yesterday as a response to @belenguerra's W & R Flash Contest... I actually wrote the story in the third person narrative since it was a true event, but I wanted it to be an enjoyable read.

However, I could not stop thinking about developing this story beyond the real one. After thinking about it for over 24 hours, this was birthed today.

I must warn you though... It has a spooky ending...

Please Enjoy...


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There was something about the atmosphere that evening, as Sarah and I hovered towards her family's hub.

I had never been here before, this part of the galaxy.. As a matter of fact, I had never been to much of anywhere.. I only ever stepped outside dad's little quarters at the far edge of the galaxy. The area set aside for the commoners.

Sarah on the other hand, was a beamer. The beamers were those with connections, with power, with money. And all beamers resided in the hubs. I always wondered how and why the distinction came to be, beamers and commoners, because we attended the same virtual schools, received the same teachings, and even sometimes, went on the same expeditions. Why we had to live separately baffled me.. But it was never a curiosity that I felt inclined to satisfy... Until today...

Today I understood why the beamers lived differently. I did, but then I digress...

The hover had stopped, and Sarah and I had alighted. The hubs amazed me, but Sarah amazed me the more...

Yes, everything about the hubs was different.. The environment, the structures, the arrangement, the plants, even the air felt and tasted differently..

But as we both waltzed towards where I believed must be Sarah's family quarters, I lingered, and watched her walk in front of me... She had the most attractive way of walking I'd ever seen. And watching her, I was glad she had finally agreed to be my friend.

In my head, I knew I didn't want it to end there, at just friendship between us.. But I had no experience in these kind of things, and I didn't want to mess things up, not in the slightest bit.

"What are you thinking about?"

She had turned, and was looking at me quizzingly now. We were already at the gate of her family's quarters. The size of it alone was enough to take a commoner's breathe away. One part of my brain wanted to drop the idea that I was finally alone with Sarah, and just take in the grandiose of my immediate vicinity...

"Stanley, a penny for your thoughts..."

Her voice stopped my reverie for a few moments. I realized that soon enough she would have to go in, and I had no idea when next I could see her physically again. It had to be now, It had to be..

I moved close to her, and held her hands...

"Well, I was just wondering..."

And then I raised my eyes to hers...

Oh, the way she looked at me.. those eyes, her lips, the hint of a smile... I couldn't help myself. I leaned forward, and kissed her...

She didn't stop me...

It was bliss!

Until my canines, of their own accord, sprouted...

Sarah opened her mouth and I could see the beginnings of a scream... I could almost hear it even... But it was too late..

I had had a taste, and she tasted exactly as I had thought... Not like the commoners I had only ever knew...

She screamed...

And I dug into her inviting veins...

THE END?


I hope you found it worth reading, as much as I did writing...

Cheers @belenguerra, and all the excellent curators out there that make Steemit worthwhile!

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This is a beautiful story.. The ending was real spooky too

Exactly as promised... Thank you for reading.

A delicious ending! Well done.

Literally and figuratively my friend. Lol..

Thank you for the wonderful comment, and the resteem @cliffagreen.

Cheers!