RE: Of Humor and Love

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Of Humor and Love

in hive-135004 •  3 days ago 

Greetings @fajrularifst

Let's move on to the assessment of tasks 2 and 3.

Task 2.

Excellent, I can see the humor, there is a title. However, you could have used elements of the telegram such as sender, recipient and subject, to evoke the format more. As I said, it's very good.

Task 3.

You condense the emotional tone of the poem and its essence very well, the feelings and emotions of betrayal, I value that it seems more prose than a poem, that was what was requested. Good job being concise. Congratulations.


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Thanks for this great third week lesson my teachers @joslud and @solperez.

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