RE: End of Sin

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End of Sin

in hive-135004 •  23 days ago 
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A whiteline between some lines might help to make it an easier read, so do shorter lines if you emwant to center text

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I would also like to see what @jiya99 thinks about the poem?

  ·  22 days ago (edited)

I literally love the way you write especially the starting lines

You thought the word * REGRET AND DONT REPEAT* how beautifully you startup the line with each alphabet like I watch the movies in which secret word is hidden in the letter. Indeed you are a good writer. To be honest the words touch my heart. We are all depressed by the past and we thought that in the present. I advice you not to think the moments that hurt you. Those chapters came into your life to teach you the lesson. You should keep in mind the lessons not suffereing. ALLAH rewards after trial remember that.
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I got to thinking that maybe someday I could collaborate with @jiya99 to become a Teaching Team on the Art of Poetry Literature.
I wonder what it will be like?

Hahah it would be awesome but in today era not many people like poetry. As poetry is an art and those who can write have deep emotions.

I would be grateful to work with you but fact is that we don't have much audience.

May ALLAH bless you😊

We don't need fake attention, what we want is to produce what comes out of our hearts and minds freely.

No need to follow what they like, let's just be ourselves and be proud of it, how about that?

May Allah open the way for us.

I would also like to hear good advice from Mrs. @wakeupkitty.

There are many art genres and every genre is divided in many different styles.
It's not all about lyrics which is in most cases the poetry people find boring or old fashioned.

Instead of doom and depression it's also possible to write something joyful.

By the way many song lyrics are poems as well.

Is this what you like to write most of all?
If so do it and see where it ends.
If it comes to teaching ask yourself what it is you like to tea h or better want to show.

I agree you should write what makes you feel good not to please others.

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