— SteemCN

There are few things you have to work on while writing a diary. Please refer to these posts and if you have any problem you can ask.

While adding tags make sure some tags are important
#steemexclusive #thediarygame #betterlife
Attach the link of your verified achievement 1.
Use steemit Pakistan's assets in your diaries to make them presentable.
Try to use clear images. They give a good impact and a reader enjoys the diary.
Write at least 300 words to tell how was your day. And use markdowns. I will suggest you complete till Achievement 4 : Applying Markdown in Newcomers' Community

Looking forward to your next diary :)
HAPPY STEEMING!