Beta, you are doing well but try to add some activities :)
Please try to follow the following links to see how better diaries can be made :)

Check Aniqa's diaries
Check Suboohi's diaries
Check event's diaries

Please check their diary games so that you can increase the quality of your content.
I am not calling it bad but it is not there upto the mark of your intelligence 😉😉

Have a good Day.
Yours, haidermehdi.
Country Representative Pakistan.