You have started in a good way. But there are things we need to improve :)

• You have ste the Title Image very well. I appreciate that.
  After that, there is a mixture of 2 lines of text and then an image. Try to be a bit more in the words. Girls do a lot of work in Ramzan i can guarantee that :p

Then about the images, please rotate them before pasting here. They shall look better than this.
The picture in the last wasn't uploaded, kindly recheck that.

The ending of the diary game could be a little better :)

Wish you a great journey here.

Good Luck :)