RE: The Diary Game || 05/09/2022 || Club5050 || Better-life || Pak vs India and Pakistan won the match || @hassan205

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The Diary Game || 05/09/2022 || Club5050 || Better-life || Pak vs India and Pakistan won the match || @hassan205

in hive-136998 •  2 years ago 

Hey Hassan. It really was a great game between the two rivals.
I liked the way you started your post but there are a few areas in which you can improve.

  • Try to begin the title with: The Diary Game | Date | And here the Topic Or Club Status.

  • Try to break text into equal paragraphs. Don't just write a single line and end the para.

  • Use free images. Also, try to use images that relate, I mean Jadeja didn't play in yesterday's game :p

  • Try to end the post in a better manner. Using bullet points at the end is not a good example of that. Try to use the footer provided :)

You're not using your upvotes and your CSI is 0. Try upvoting at least 10 posts per day and do not let your vp go down below 80%. We will be keeping a check. Until and unless you don't start upvoting others and you don't comment on other's posts, we won't be able to give you voting support.

Regards, Country Representative Pakistan.
Haidermehdi.

I hope you will take notes and improve as per the guidelines.

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Thank you very much for your comment, I really did not know these things, you have added a lot to my knowledge. I will try my best to fulfill the conditions you have told me. Thank you