She has long hair
Which she dyed black
She don't have a magic comb
But she does have a knife
She's a modern day Rapunzel
And her hair is only the same as before
It falls to her shoulders now
Her eyes are bigger now, and they're green-- not hazel any more!
It's not that she's vain or anything, but this girl has got to save herself.
She needs an escape route out of this tower. This is getting old.
It can't be right to imprison someone in a tower for years on end. Think about the damage it does to your hair.
After all, she didn't even cause her father's death! She didn't kill him!
Her mother's hair is still natural, but her eyes are different.
They're blue. Her nose too, and she has a scar on her chin-- not that it matters because she doesn't want to know anything about where it came from.
She's still got her whole life ahead of her, but it would be nice to see the world outside.
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It's not that she dislikes seeing other people-- she's just so bored here. She loves being with her mother more than anything, but she hates being locked away in this tower.
She wants her hair to get longer so she can cut it off and dye it back to its original color.
But she won't
She is modern day Rapunzel
Hello dear, you have written such a wonderful poem!
But I will like you to improve in the number of words and the application of markdown styles. Have you done upto achievement 4? If not, I will like to assist you with that
Then,try to include your introduction post link at the end of your posts
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Yes i have done that, but these are poems. How can i change the poem's writing.
They have a particular syntax we need to follow.
But sure i will try to improve thanks for kind suggestions <3
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Alright sweetheart, love you so much. Keep up the good work, ok?
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Yes sure, I will try my best to :)
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She is just a great Rapunzel. Her hair description is excellent. But it's sad how they lock her up all day, everyone needs to see the outside world!
Oh! May she never die of boredom
May she find true satisfaction in the world
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No doubt, she must be allowed to live her life in her own way
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